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2016上海中考英语作文《一》
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话题一：写人篇
★范文1. My best friend
My best friend is --- He is 15 years old. We are both in the same class. He works very hard. He is never late for school and he does well in all his lessons. He is always ready to help others. My math is very poor, so he often helps me with my math after class. His parents are both teachers. They are very busy, so he often helps do the housework at home. He is a little shorter than me but he is very strong. He likes playing football very much at school. We often play football together and he plays it pretty well, He gets on well with us, everyone in our class likes him. ★范文2. The Teacher I Like Best
Of all my teachers, I love Mrs. Li best. She taught us English in junior middle school.
he had many ways of making her classes interesting and exciting. She always taught us something new in easy ways. She helped us use English by doing interesting activities, such as, making surveys, playing games, etc.
Mrs. Li was a strict but kind teacher. She often asked us to be on time for class and do homework by ourselves. When we had trouble, she often helped us out.
★范文3. My Chinese Teacher
Of all the subjects, I like Chinese best because I have a good Chinese teacher. Though she has been teaching us for only three years, I respect and love her very much.
My Chinese teacher，Ms Sun is thirty-six years old and she is neither tall nor short. 折works very hard. She is always the first to come and the last to leave her office. She tries to make her classes lively and interesting. And we enjoy her lessons very much.
Ms Sun is very kind and friendly to us. And we＇re getting on well with each other. But she is very strict with us in our studies.
Ms Sun teaches us so well that we all enjoy learning Chinese. All the students think she is one of the most popular teachers in our school.
话题二：毕业，回忆，感恩，幸福 ，助人为乐，烦恼，压力
1. 回顾初中三年成长过程，你一定有很多感受，从学习， 生活，爱好等方面作出自我评价 ( 毕业 回顾评价)
★范文
I have studied in my middle school for three years. I have learned a lot. I have learned not only how to make friends but also how to talk to others. I have many hobbies. I like sports. I often play basketball, football and volleyball with my friends. Football is my favorite. Of all my subjects, I do best in English and Chinese. But my math and physics are a little weak. I think I will try my best to learn them well. I hope I can study in No.1 High School.
2. 初中生活马上就要结束了，三年的初中生活一定给你留下了很多挥之不去的回忆。请你给大家讲一个最值得你回忆的故事。包括时间、人物、事情经过和事后你的感想（请不要写出真实的学校名称以及真实姓名）。 提示词语： three years, memories, one of, one day, think, happy/ sorry
★ 范文
How time flies! I have studied in my school for three years. And I will graduate from middle school in a month.
I am eager to share my happiness and sadness with you. I had so many memories in three years' life. One of them impressed me very much.
I still remember, when I began to learn English, I found it too difficult. No matter how hard I tried, I still couldn't do well in it and almost gave it up. As soon as my English teacher found my problem, she had a talk with me about how to learn English well. Since then, she has kept helping me. Little by little, I've become interested in English and I'm good at it. I think I am so lucky to become one of her students. I've learned a lot from her. I will try to help others when they are in trouble. I think it is a happy thing to help others.
3. My School life ( 我的学校生活)
My name is Beth. I'm 14 years old, and I study in No. 1 Middle School of Hangzhou. My school is very big and beautiful. I'm very happy in the school.
I usually get up at 6:15 in the morning. Then I do morning exercises in the playground. At 6:40, I have my breakfast. You can see many students and teachers in the dinning room. After breakfast, I often read English with my classmates.
We have six classes every day. The first class begins at 7:50 am. I like all the classes for my teachers can make the classes lively and interesting. My favorite subject is English, so I join English Corner every week. I can speak English with many other students there. It's very interesting and exciting. I think it's help for me to learn English well. After class, I always play games with my friends. We play soccer ball, basketball, volleyball, ping-pong and so on. They are very relaxing.
I like my lessons, my friends and my teachers. In a word, I love my school. I find my school life more and more colorful. My school life is wonderful, isn't it?
4. 三年的初中生活就要结束，崭新的高中学习即将到来。回顾过去，你一定有许多成功的喜悦与失利的遗憾；展望未来，你肯定有美好的憧憬和实实在在的打算。请你以―Unforgettable Memories ‖为题，给英文报纸21st Century ―青春校园‖栏目写一篇80词左右的征文。
Unforgettable Memories
How time flies! Three years passed in a blink. Lots of memories left in my head. Teachers, classmates, hard work and above all friendship stay in mind. Looking back, I have gone through either the joy of success or the pains of failure. Teachers are friendly to us in life and always strict with us in study. Classmates and friends help me so much. With their help I‘ve made great progress. But I‘m a careless boy. And I always make mistakes which can be avoided. Senior middle school life is a new beginning and it gives me a chance to overcome my shortcomings. As it is said, ―It is not our abilities that show what we truly are, it is our choice.‖ The two-month holiday will also provide me the freedom to think over and make up my mind to do it better in the future. And I believe I can do it.
5 . 在即将告别母校的时刻， 你想表达你对母校、老师、职员和同学的感恩之情。请以The last moment held on to(难舍时刻)为题， 用英语写出一篇短文。
The last moment held on to
How time flies! We‘re just leaving you—our lovely junior high school. I have so many words from my heart to say. Thanks, dear junior school. You‘re a beautiful and happy home for us all. I hope you‘ll be better and better. Thanks, dear teachers. You‘re taught us lot of knowledge and helped us in all ways. I‘ll remember you forever. Thanks, our staff members. You‘ve taken good care of us and helped us grow up. I hope you are happy all the time. Thanks, dear classmates. You‘ve got on well with me just like sisters and brothers. Let‘s always keep in touch with each other. Thanks, all my loved ones. All the best to you ! Goodbye!
6. 假设让你代表今年的初中毕业生在毕业典礼上发言，请根据所给提示用英语写一篇发言稿。
回顾美丽的校园，师生友好，生动有趣的课堂，三年来的收获感谢老师的培养（training），父母的支持（support），同学的帮助祝愿考生自拟
注意：1. 词数：不少于80词。开头和结尾部分已给出，不计入词数。
2. 发言稿需包括所给提示内容，不要逐词翻译，可适当发挥，使短文连贯、通顺。
3. 文中不得出现真实的人名、校名等相关信息。
Good morning,my dear teachers and schoolmates,
It's a great honor for me to make a speech on behalf of the graduating classes. How time flies! Our junior high school lives will come to an end.
________________________________________________________________________
Thank you for listening.
参考范文：
Good morning,my dear teachers and schoolmates,
It's a great honor for me to make a speech on behalf of the graduating classes. How time flies! Our junior high school lives will come to an end.
In the past three years, we've had a beautiful school and it provides us with a good study place. Teachers are our friends. They've given us interesting lessons and we all love them.
We've learned a lot from them, not only knowledge but also the way to solve problems in life. Thanks for our teachers' training, parents' support and the help from classmates. Without them, we couldn't have so much wonderful time.
At last, we hope our school will become better, our teachers will be healthy for ever and all our dreams will come true.
Thank you for listening.
7. 初中阶段的学习即将结束，回想自己在父母和师长的关爱和帮助下的成长过程，心中充满感激之情。请用英语给父母或老师写一封80词左右的信表示感谢。
★范文
Dear parents,
Words fail me when I want to express my thanks to you. You have taken good care of me since I was
born.When I am in trouble,you always encourage me and cheer me up.Once I argued with my best friend and was upset,you talked with me the whole night and finally helped me solve the problem. With your help,I have become a good student.I am so thankful for your love that I will work harder and try to do better in the future.
Best wishes.
Yours,
Zhang hua
8. 请以《家人的爱》为题写一篇80词左右的英语短文。
When I just opened my eyes , I could see my mom and dad‘s smiling face . When I just learned to walk, I could hear mother‘s encouraging voice. I still remember when I was ill, daddy took me to the hospital deep in the night. But, most of the time, I didn‘t understand them . Through more than 10 years of understanding, I know that they also have many hobbies and troubles, just like us .
I am growing up day by day with my family love.
9. 幸福是什么？幸福是父母为你营造的温馨的家，幸福是老师望向你的赞许的目光，幸福是孤独时朋友送来的一杯奶茶，幸福是…… 请以My happiness为话题，写一件曾经发生过的令你感到幸福的事情。
要求：条理清晰，语言流畅，用词准确， 字迹工整，80-100词。
★ 范文
Happiness is important in our life. In fact, happiness is always around you if you put your heart into it。
I will never forget one thing. Once, I had a bad mark at a math test. I was shy and afraid to meet my parents. But when I got back home late, my parents knew what happened, they said to me: ―It doesn't matter, my child. Remember we'll be always beside you when you need help. We believe you can be better next time. Never give up!‖ I was moved and made up my mind to work harder and harder。
I feel happy. Whenever I am in trouble, I can feel my parents' love. I want to be a good child for my parents.
10. 年是学习雷锋五十周年纪念日，雷锋同志说过：―我要把有限的生命，投入到无限的为人民服务之中去。‖ 请写一篇意思连贯，符合逻辑，不少于80字的作文。
在作文中，简单表述你对雷锋的崇敬之情，为什么向雷锋叔叔学习以及你在日常生活中是如何帮助他人的。 ★ 范文
Leifeng was known as a pattern that offered help to others selflessly. He devoted all this life into his beloved career as well. I, myself, was totally shocked by his character.
Such is human nature; people trace the good, water flows to low. Everyone should copy his sprit as our daily life goes instead of uttering a meaningless slogan ―learn from Leifeng, our decent idol‖， so that we could definitely see a lot more smiling faces rather than conflict.
To help others is not a hard thing, however, what you need is to consist doing it. Take myself as an example. I am the representative of Math, to collect homework is my daily task, however, I would turn them to the right page for shorten the time for teachers when correcting them.
11. 在和谐社会里，人与人之间的互帮互助已构成我们生活中的重要组成部分。下周英国友好学校将来你校访问，你校英语俱乐部将举行一次以"Helping Each Other Makes the World Wonderful"为主题的英语演讲比赛。假如李智要参加演讲比赛，请你以"李智"的名义用英语写一篇讲稿。内容要点提示：
1、 帮助同学 --友谊; 2、 帮助老人 --幸福; 3、 帮助病人 --快乐; 4、 帮助别人体会......
要求：
1、 词数：80词左右。正文开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数;
2、 文中不能出现自己的姓名和所在学校的名称。
参考范文：
Helping Each Other Makes the World Wonderful
Hello, everyone. I'm Li Zhi. It's nice to speak about help here. In our life we often help others and also get help from others. When we help our classmates with their study and other things, we can develop our friendship. If we give a hand to old people, we can understand the meaning of pleasure. As we know, patient in our life. I think we can get much when we help the people around us. As the saying goes, "Giving is much better than receiving."
Thank you for your listening.
12. 爱是心中的太阳，融化你我身边的冰雪。假设你是李明，你们学校的 "English Garden"正在举办主题为"付出即是收获"的征文活动，请你联系自己平时的爱心行为和感受写一篇文章投稿。
要求：1、文中不得出现真实人名和校名等相关信息。
2、80－100词，标题和文章开头已给出，不计入总词数。
参考词汇：help ,clean up,an old people's home,make...happy
Giving Is Receiving
I am a student from Green Middle School. My name is Li Ming. I like helping others because I think it makes me very happy. I often help my classmates with their schoolwork. Sometimes I help clean up city parks. I go to the old people's home and do some cleaning for them once a month. So I'm pretty popular there. I often visit the Children's Hospital to cheer the sick kids up. I read stories and sing songs for them. I'm good with children. I also give money to charities to help people in trouble. I think giving is receiving. Helping others is helping ourselves. Do you agree with me?
13. 假如你是Han Mei, 下面是一封你的笔友Alice 给你发来的e-mail,请你根据e-mail 的内容给她写一封回信，与她交流看法，并帮她排忧解难。
提示词语：listen to, mother's love, care about, communicate with, get along with, smile
写作要求：1.语句通顺，书写工整；2.可用所给提示词语，也可以适当发挥；3.词数在60-80左右 Dear Han Mei,
I'm afraid I've got a big problem recently. My mother talks too much to me. She always tells me, "Be careful while crossing the street." "Put on more clothes." "Did you do a good job at school?" and so on. I'm annoyed(烦恼)。What shall I do?
Alice
例文
Dear Alice,
As a teenager, I met the same problem as you. But now I can get along better with my mother. Here are some ideas for you.
Your mother talks much, because she cares about you. Maybe it's not a good way, but it shows your mother's love. So I think you should listen to her. If your opinions are different from your mother's, you can communicate with her, and tell her what you are thinking about.
If your mother doesn't take your advice, just keep silent and give her a smile.
I hope what I say here can help you a lot.
Yours，
Han Mei
14. 假设你是Emma，你的笔友Josh给你写了一封电子邮件，向你倾诉他在家里的一些烦恼。请根据来信和提示，给Josh回一封电子邮件。先说说你的看法，再给出建议，并适当发挥。提示：1.内容要点：（1）看法：在父母看来，我们仍是孩子；父母这样做是为了保护我们。
（2）建议：给父母写信谈谈你的想法；主动帮你父母做些力所能及的事情。
2.回信应包括以上所有提示的信息，做到行文连贯，不要逐字翻译。
3.词数：不少于80。开头和结尾已经写好，不计入总词数。
Dear Josh,
Thanks for your e-mail. I have ever had the same experience. I even had a fight with my parents. But now, I understand them.
____________________________________________________________________
I hope this helps!
Emma
参考范文1：
Dear Josh,
2016上海中考英语作文《二》
2016中考英语作文格式
中考英语作文格式
一．书信的格式要求
1. 在信的右上角写上写信人的地址和日期（电子邮件一般可以不写）
2. 在信纸左侧，正文之前写dear
3. 写信的正文
4. 在信纸的中间稍右下角写出祝愿语或结束语，可以用yours/sincerely yours.等，在它的下方定上写信人的姓名
e.g. 云南地震，鼓励人们
No.1 middle school,
Tai’an city, Shandong
June 2nd， 2014
my dear friends,
i am very sorry to know the big earthquake took place in your hometown. maybe many people around you lost their lives in the earthquake. but please don’t be afraid. you are not lonely. we will be with you for ever. let’s cheer up. to be brave to face all kinds of difficulties. learn to forget these sad things. study hard form now on and try your best to make much progress in your study and life. and we are sure that our future will be more beautiful.
yours,
cherry
二． 失物招领和寻物启事的格式要求
1. 寻物词以lost为标题，招领启示以found为题 写在内容正上方居中的位置
2. 另起一行，在标题下面的右上角写日期
3. 寻物的正文内容主要关于遗失的物品，遗失的时间，地点和如果有人发现或捡到可以送交的人或地点
4. 招领的正文包括招领的物品，拾到物品的地点，时间以及失主认领物品的地点，联系人等信息
5. 单位/个人署名写在正文的右下角。
标题
日期
正文
署名
我在操场拾得一串钥匙,请打电话 65296403 找 mario.
found
June 2nd, 2014
I found a set of keys on the playground yesterday. please call mario at 65296403. mario
三．写日记
1. 日期：在左上角写日期和具体星期几
2. 天气：与日期同行，位于正方右上方
3. 正文：正方的第一段，一般与日期对齐
June
2nd Monday sunny
it was the first day of our winter holiday. all of us were very happy. why? because we have one month to do the things we love. we are free, although we have so much homework to do , we can finish them in several days. and we can make good use of the rest time . we have been very tired after hard studying. in winter holidays, i want to have full sleep and eat good food in order to relax myself. and then i will have a good rest.
四．通知
1. 在第一行的中间写notice
2. 在低于notice一行往右约5个字母的距离处开始写通知内容。
3. 在正文的右下方写发通知的单位或单位负责人的姓名
4. 在通知中时间一般写在文中或正文的左下文，并低于通知发出单位的左边顶格处开始写通知日期。通知日期有时也可写在正文的右上文。注：英文中所有称呼，通知的发出单位和被通知对象均用第三人称。
notice
may I have your attention, please? i have an announcement to make. the students' union is going to hold a party on saturday evening, august 15, to welcome our friends from the united states. the party will be held in the roof garden of the main building (主搂) .it will begin at 7:30 p.m. there will be music, dancing, singing, games and exchange of gifts. will everybody please bring along a small gift for this purpose? remember to wrap it up, sign your name and write a few words of good wishes ( 祝愿).
don't forget: 7:30 saturday evening, roof garden, main building. there's sure to be a lot of fun. everybody is welcome.
students' union
五．留言条
1. 普通留言条：一般不必写地点。时间与日期写在便条的右上方。结尾语可省，如果要加结尾语，可以和书信相同，署名在结尾语下面
e.g. 假设你是jim，你来还linda字典，可是她不在。他把字典带回去准备明天还。 dear linda,
i come to return the dictionary to you but you are out. i am afraid it is not right to put it outside the door,so i will take it back. i am going to give it back to you tomorrow. the dictionary is of great use and i am trying to get one. thank you.
jim
2. 电话留言条
from ：_______________
to ：_______________
date ：_______________
time ：_______________
message ：______________________________________________________
六．电子邮件
假如你是泰安某中学的一名学生，今年暑假将参加由grs组织的去美国的夏令营，对方要求你通过电子邮件发送一份个人简历（a resume）,电子邮件地址是简历内容包括下列内容：你叫刘梅，女，1999年出生在山东省泰安市市，2006-20012年在泰安一小学上学，所学科目有语文、数学、英语、电脑、体育、音乐、美术，最喜欢的是体育课。业余爱好广泛，有旅游、听音乐、跑步和网上冲浪。你还擅长唱歌，跳舞等。 to:__________________________
subject:________________________
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
yours,
liu mei
七、请假条
请假条(written request for leave)是英语学习者必须掌握的常用应用文之一，它包括请病假(note for sick leave) 和请事假 (leave of absence)。请假条是用于向老师或上级领导等因身体状况不好或因某事请求准假的场合。
英文请假条写作需注意三点：
1.英文中请假条的写法和汉语请假条相同， 它一般由四部分组成，即时间、称呼、正文和签名。
2.一般而言，可认定请假条是一种简单的书信文体。请假条一般写在纸上，不用信封。其书写格式与书信有很多相似之处，是书信的大大简化。
3.请假条的特点是要求开门见山、内容简短、用词通俗易懂。
may 15th
dear mr/ms xxx;
today i'm writing to you to ask for a five-day leave, for i've got cold last night with carlessness.
this morning my mother took me to see the doctor who told me to stay in bed for some days. so i am very sorry to be absent from school, especially your interesting lessons. i'll be sure to make up for the missed lessons after i recover from the illness. yours ever,
xxx.
尊敬/亲爱的xxx；
我今天给您写信是要请5天的假，因为我昨天晚上不小心感冒了。今天早上，我妈妈带我去看了大夫，大夫告诉我要在家里躺几天。所以，我对缺颗，特别是不能上您那有趣的颗，感到难过。我病好后一定把漏掉的课程补上。
此致
敬礼。
您的学生；xxx.
一、英语书信的常见写作形式
开头部分：
How nice to hear from you again.
Let me tell you something about the activity.
I’m glad to have received your letter of Apr. 9th.
I’m pleased to hear that you’re coming to China for a visit.
I’m writing to thank you for your help during my stay in America.
结尾部分：
With best wishes.
I’m looking forward to your reply.
I’d appreciate it if you could reply earlier.
二、口头通知常见写作
呼语及开场白部分：
Ladies and gentlemen， May I have your attention， please？ I have an
announcement to make.
正文部分：
All the teachers and students are required to attend it.
Please take your notebooks and make notes.
Please listen carefully and we’ll have a discussion in groups.
Please come on time and don’t be late.
结束语部分：
Please come and join in it.
Everybody is welcome to attend it.
I hope you’ll have a nice time here.
That’s all. Thank you.
三、议论文
1.正反观点式议论文
导入：
第1段：Recently we’ve had a discussion about whether we should.。. （导入话题）
Our opinions are divided on this topic.（观点有分歧）
正文：
第2段：Most of the students are in favour of it.（正方观点）
Here are the reasons. First.。. Second.。. Finally.。.（列出2~3个赞成的理由）
第3段：However， the others are strongly against it. （反方观点）
Their reasons are as follows. In the first place.。. What’s more.。. In addition.。.（列出2~3个反对的理由）
结论：
第4段：Personally speaking， the advantages overweigh the disadvantages， for it will do us more harm than good， so I support it.（个人观点）
2.“A或者B”类议论文：
导入：
第1段：Some people hold the opinion that A is superior to B in many ways. Others， however， argue that B is much better. Personally， I would prefer A because I think
A has more advantages.
正文：
第2段：There are many reasons why I prefer A. The main reason is that 。.. Another reason is that.。.（赞同A的原因）
第3段： Of course， B also has advantages to some extent.。. （列出1~2个B的优势）
结论：
第4段： But if all these factors are considered， A is much better than B. From what has been discussed above， we may finally draw the conclusion that 。..（得出结论） オ
3.观点论述类议论文：
导入：
第1段：提出一种现象或某个决定作为议论的话题
As a student， I am strongly in favour of the decision. （亮明自己的观点是赞成还是反对）
The reasons for this may be listed as follows. （过渡句，承上启下）
正文：{2016上海中考英语作文}.
第2段：First of all.。. Secondly.。. Besides.。.（列出2~3个赞成或反对的理由）
结论：
第3段：In conclusion， I believe that.。. （照应第1段，构成“总—分—总”结构）
4.“How to”类议论文：
导入：
第1段：提出一种现象或某种困难作为议论的话题
正文：
2016上海中考英语作文《三》
2016中考英语作文背诵范文(带翻译)
一、Great changes in my hometown
More than twenty years ago, my hometown was just a small , old and poor town. Most of people were farmers. There were few factories. The people didn’t have enough food to eat and wore old clothes. They had a hard life .
Great changes have taken place in the past twenty years . The people have found a lot of ways of making money . Now there are many tall buildings . They are very beautiful . Roads are wide and clean . People can take buses or drive their own cars to go to work . Many people have cell phones and personal computers. People’s living conditions have improved a lot . Thanks to the government’s efforts . my hometown is becoming more and more beautiful .
一,在我的家乡发生了很大的变化
二十多年来,我的家乡只是个小,又老又穷镇。大多数人都是农民。有几个工厂。人们没有足够的食物吃,把旧衣服穿在身上。他们有一个艰苦的生活。
发生了巨大的变化,在过去的20年。人们已经发现很多的赚钱途径。现在有许多高大的建筑物。他们很漂亮。道路宽阔,又干净。人们可以搭公车或驾驶自己的汽车去上班。许多人有手机和个人电脑。人民的生活条件有了很大的进步。由于政府的努力。我的家乡正变得越来越美丽了。
二、Save the earth
How to protect the environment has become one of the biggest problems in the world .
It’s our duty to protect our environment . No matter where we live , we should do something to keep our neighborhood clean and tidy . We can collect waste paper or other waste things for recycling. We should plant more trees and we should prevent those factories from pouring waste water into rivers, lakes and fields. We shouldn’t leave rubbish everywhere and spit in public places . We mustn’t pick the flowers or step on the grass in public. If everyone tries his best to protect the environment , the world will become much more beautiful and our life will be better and better .
二、拯救地球
如何保护环境已成为世界上最大的问题。
这是我们的责任保护我们的环境。不管我们居住的地方,我们应该做些事情来保持我们的邻居整洁。我们可以收集废纸或其他废弃物回收利用。我们应该种更多的树,我们应该阻止那些工厂从浇注废水流入河流、湖泊和领域。我们不应该把垃圾随处可见,在公共场所随地吐痰。我们不能摘花、践踏草地在公众场合。如果每个人都尽自己最大的努力去保护环境,世界将变得更加美丽,我们的生活一定会越来越好。
三、Improve our environment
Good environment can make people feel happy. To improve the environment means to qualify our life . What should we do to improve our environment ?
We should plant more trees . And we should prevent those factories from pouring waste water into rivers , lakes and fields . Whenever we see litter on the ground , we should pick it up and throw it into a dustbin . Don’t spit in public places . Don’t draw on public walls . It’s our duty to keep our earth clean and tidy .
三、改善我们的环境
好的环境能让人感到快乐。改善环境意味着资格我们的生活。我们应该做什么来改善我们的环境?
我们应该种更多的树。我们应该阻止那些工厂从浇注废水流入河流、湖泊和领域。当我们看到垃圾在地上,我们应该把它捡起来,扔进一个垃圾箱。不要在公共场所随地吐痰。别把公共墙壁。这是我们的责任,让我们的地球整洁。
四、Pollution around us
In recent years our life is becoming better and better. But our environment is becoming worse and worse. It’s very bad for our life. Now many people have air-conditioners and cars, they produce (give off ) waste gas. More and more trees are being cut down. There are so much sand on the earth (leaving only sand ) . We often see factories pour waste into rivers or lakes. Water in the river is quite dirty. We haven’t enough clean water to drink in cities. Now we are in danger. It’s very necessary and important to protect the environment well. I think if everyone tries his best to protect the environment, the world will become much more
beautiful , and our life will be better and better .
四、我们周围的污染
近年来我们的生活越来越好。但是我们的环境变得越来越糟糕。它对我们的生活很糟糕。现在许多人有空调、汽车、生产(出)废气。越来越多的树被砍伐。有那么多的沙子在这块土地上只留下沙砾)。我们经常看到工厂将废物倒入河流或湖泊。河里的水是很脏。我们没有足够的干净的水喝的城市。现在我们正处于危险中。这是非常必要的和重要的保护好环境。我认为,如果每个人都尽自己最大的努力去保护环境,世界将变得更加美丽,我们的生活会越来越好。
五、Make our world more beautiful !
Protecting the environment is becoming more and more important to humans . It’s our duty to take care of the nature around us . Animals and plants are our best friends ., and we should share the world with them . We shouldn’t kill wild animals , and we must protect forests because they are animals’ home . We must plant more trees and grass , they can make the world greener . The more beautiful the world is, the happier lives we will have . Let’s do our best to make the world beautiful.
五,使我们的世界更美丽!
环境保护是越来越重要的人类。这是我们的责任照顾我们周围的天性。动物和植物都是我们最好的朋友。,我们应该与他们共同分享这个世界。我们不应该杀野生动物,我们必须保护森林,因为他们是动物的家。我们必须种植更多的树木和草,他们就可以让世界环保。更美丽的世界,我们将会有快乐的生活。让我们尽我们所能使世界美丽。
六、Keep our school clean
We are studying in this school. It is our duty to keep it clean and tidy. It is not good to spit in public places, such as in the library, in the class. We shouldn’t leave rubbish here and there. Don’t draw pictures on the wall, they influence the look of our school . We should keep the classroom clean and tidy. And we should do some cleaning often. If everyone tries his best to do something useful for our school, I’m sure our school will be more beautiful .
六,保持校园清洁
我们在这所学校学习。这是我们的责任保持房间整洁。这并不是一个好吐唾沫在公共场所,如在图书馆,在课堂上。我们不应该把垃圾扔在这里和那里。不要在墙上乱画,他们影响看我们的学校。我们应该保持教室干净整洁。我们应该经常做些清洁。如果每个人都尽自己最大努力做些有用的事情对我们学校来说,我相信我们的学校也会变得更加美好。
七、My country life
I like to live in the countryside. I live in a small village. There is a river near it. Lots of trees are around my house. I can see a lot of farms and birds. There is less noise. The air here is cleaner and fresher. There are fewer cars. I read aloud early in the morning. When it is getting dark, the moon is bright in the sky. It’s very quiet . What a nice place I live in !
七、我的乡村生活
我喜欢住在乡下。我住在一个小村庄。附近有一条河。许多树在房子的周围。我能看到很多农场和鸟类。有低噪音。这里的空气清洁和清新。有私家车的减少。我念在清晨。当它变得黑暗,月亮在天空明亮。它很安静。一个好地方我住在!
八、How to learn English well
As we know , English has become an international language. It is more popular than any other language in China . English is widely spoken in the world and it is the most useful language around the world . But how to learn it well ?
The best way is to use it all the time . If we can talk in English , think in English we can learn it well . At school , we should learn to hear , speak, read and write carefully . We should spend enough time in practicing English . If we keep on working hard at English , we will be able to be good at it one day .
八、如何学好英语
正如我们所知,英语已成为一种国际语言。它更受欢迎,比其他任何语言在中国。英语在世界上被广泛地使用,是全世界最有用的语言。但是如何学好英语呢?
最好的方法是使用它。如果我们可以一起说英语、用英语思考我们能把它学好。在学校,我们应该学会听、说、读、写的小心。我们应该花足够的时间在练习英语。如果我们继续努力学英语,我们将能够做得很好一天。{2016上海中考英语作文}.
九、I want to be a tour guide
I want to be a tour guide because Beijing will host the 2008 Olympic Games. There will be many people to come to China from all over the world. Most of them don’t know Chinese. They want to visit many interesting places in China. I can be one of the guides. I can make much money, too. How happy I will be! So from now on , I must study hard. I am going to learn English every day. I will try my best to make it come true.
九、我想成为一名导游
我想成为一名导游,因为北京将举办2008年奥运会。将有许多人来中国的来自世界各地。他们中大多数人都不懂中文。他们想去参观中国许多有趣的地方。我可以成为一个导游。我赚的钱,太。我将会多么幸福!所以从现在开始,我必须努力学习。我要每天都要学英语。我会尽我所能让它成真。
十、The Internet
The Internet is becoming more and more important to us. Without it, we can’t do work better. We can go shopping without going out of our houses. And we can listen to music or watch movies on the Internet. It can also help a lot with our study. We can learn much knowledge on different subjects, and get information as soon as possible. But now, some of us work, study or play on the Internet for long time, especially for young people to play computer games. It’s bad for our eyes and health. If we make good use of the Internet, it will be our best friends and help us a lot . 十,互联网
互联网正成为越来越多的了解这一点对我们至关重要。没有它,我们不能做的更好的工作。我们可以去购物,就不能从我们的房子。我们能听音乐或看电影在互联网上。它也能帮助很多学习。我们可以学到很多知识对不同的学科而言,尽快获取信息。但是现在,我们中的一些人工作、学习或玩在互联网上很长时间了,尤其是对年轻人玩电脑游戏。这是对我们的眼睛有害健康。如果我们好好利用互联网,它将是我们最好的朋友,帮助我们很多。
2016上海中考英语作文《四》
2016上海中考作文评分
2016
上海中考必读：英语老师解密中考英语作文评分标准 中考英语作文难不难?其实不难，大部分同学都能得到12分以上，13、14分也是平常，但是要想得到15分甚至以上，就难上加难了。到底什么样的作文能得到16分以上?经过和中考命题组和阅卷组老师的交流，我们对中考英语作文评分标准做出了更深的理解。
一、中考英语写作的概述
关于体裁，本文包含记叙文和议论文两种最容易考到的类型，其他一些文体也有可能会综合涉及。
关于题材，同学们的反应可谓是“几家欢喜几家愁”。上海中考写作也有自己的特色：一般围绕着“生活化、学校化”来考察。近几年，考试题目实际上是一些比较贴近中学生活，为中学生能够的认识能力、生活经历所能驾驭的问题。比如：
2009年题目“I Want to Do something for my School”(我想为学校做的一件事)
2010年题目“I’m Proud of myself”(我为自己感到自豪)
2011年题目“I am a member of_____”(我是„的一员)
2012年题目“A letter to Joe”(给Joe的一封建议信)
2013年题目“How to protect myself”(如何保护自己)
2014年题目“The time next year”(明年此时)
2015年题目“I want to invent ____”(我想要发明___)
你对于在中考英语写作中拿高分有把握吗?实际考试中，许多学生却常常有“无话可说”的感觉。那要如何我们才能克服这种无话的状态，取得高分呢? 归根到底这是一个英语基本功——单词、短语和句型的问题。
英语作文的前提条件是掌握了一定量的词汇、语法及体裁、题材等方面的知识。学生如果想要在写作方面有本质上的提升，必须进行多次的写作练习。因此，必须合理地设置训练步骤，遵循从初级到高级，从简单到复杂的原则去练习，经过一段写作实践之后，写作水平一定会有大幅度的提高。
二、中考英语写作的评分标准{2016上海中考英语作文}.
1、老师拿到的标准
写作水平的高低和文章的好坏，分数是最直接的评分标准，也是考生们最关心的。但是多少考生真正透彻知道中考英语写作的评分标准?什么样的文章才是阅卷老师眼中的好文章?
评分标准：
①整篇作文满分20分，其中内容8分，语言8分，结构4分。
②内容贴切，句子流畅，用语准确，加整体印象分1分。
③不满60个词，少1——5个词扣0.5分，6——10个词扣1分。 ④所有给出问题涉及的三项内容，每少一项扣3分。
⑤每个拼写，大小写，标点符号等错误扣0.5分;同一的拼写错误不重复扣分，扣分总和不超过2分。
⑥语法错误每项扣1分，同一错误不重复扣分，扣分总和不超过2分。
2、老师想看到的标准
语言(8分)：词——固定搭配、高频重点词汇;
句——复杂句(各种从句)、特殊句型、正确的句子! 内容(8分)：(总、分)论点、论据支持句;
简洁、切合主题的记叙内容。
结构(4分)：语言结构——句子重点突出、内容清晰;
内容结构——论点、论据以及记叙之间的逻辑关系; 句数控制——对于相对内容的句数掌握;
亮点、出彩点——排比、拟人、谚语、成语、押韵等
2016上海中考英语作文《五》
2016中考英语作文热点话题
2016中考英语作文热点话题:旅游介绍
旅游介绍的话题在这几年中考英语作文的出现的次数相对来说占比很大,2016年中考英语作文极有可能出现,下面是一篇关于北京首都的一篇旅游介绍英语范文,介绍其他地方也是差不多的,句型可以互用,同学们可以借以参考学习……
介绍首都北京
请你阅读你的加拿大网友Tommy的e-mail,根据e-mail的内容,给他写一封回信. Dear Li Lei,
I haven't heard from you for a long time. I'm glad to tell you that I'll visit Beijing this summer vacation. It is said that Beijing is a great city with a long history and more changes have taken place since the 2008 Olympic Games. I would like to know something about Beijing, such as places of interest, the environment, traffic and people there.
I'm looking forward to hearing from you soon.
Yours,
Tommy
★ 范文
Dear Tommy,
I'm glad to know you will come to Beijing.
Beijing, the capital of China, is one of the largest cities in the world. There are many places of interest, such as the Summer Palace, the Forbidden City and the Great Wall. All of them are beautiful and well-known to the world. Great changes have taken place in Beijing since we successfully held the 2008 0lympic Games.
Now, people pay more attention to the environment. More trees and flowers have been planted. For the traffic, it is very convenient for people to travel around Beijing, because several new subway lines have been built. If you come to Beijing, you will find people here are very friendly and helpful. What's more, a lot of people can speak English. Beijing is really an attractive city with a long history.
I'm looking forward to hearing from you soon.
Yours,
Li Lei
2016上海中考英语作文《六》
2016中考英语作文总结版
中考英语作文写作模板
一、书信
二、 日记
三、通知
四、启事
1. 遗失启事
2. 招领启事