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六年级英语作文myweekend5句《一》
pep五年级下册英语作文My_Weekend
My Weekend
There are two days on the weekend.On Saturday,in the morning ,I do my homework,at break time,I and my mother play the badminton.In afternoon,I and my father go shopping,we buy some foods.On Sunday,at noon,I and mother into the Mathematical Olympiad,at night,my father cook dinner for me.
We are very happy!
六年级英语作文myweekend5句《二》
六年级下册my weekend作文过去时
第二单元小作文，背会
My busy weekend
I was very busy last weekend.
On Saturday morning, I read a book and did my homework . In the afternoon , I played sports with my friend and saw a film .
On Sunday morning , I stayed at home and watched TV . In the afternoon , I cleaned my room and washed my clothes .
How busy I was !
My busy weekend
I had a very busy weekend .
On Saturday morning, I got up early and visited my grandparents with my mother . In the afternoon , I saw a film with my father . In the evening , I listened to music and slept all night .
On Sunday morning , I stayed at home and did my homework. In the afternoon , I cleaned my room and washed my clothes . In the evening , I watched TV and read a book .
This was my weekend : busy but happy !
(同步训练24页的作文)
Tom’s weekend
Tom had a very busy weekend .
On Saturday morning , he cleaned his room and washed his clothes . On Saturday afternoon , he went fishing with his father and watched TV .
On Sunday morning , he read a book and did his homework . On Sunday afternoon , he played basketball and saw a film .
Tom’s weekend was busy but very happy .
六年级英语作文myweekend5句《三》
小学英语作文：我的周末 My Weekend
小学英语作文：我的周末 My Weekend
I think everyone likes weekend. Because it's time for relax and fun. Now I want to talk about my weekend.
I often spend Saturday for fun. Such as playing basketball with my friends, watching movies and TV shows, having a trip with family and so on. And I always spend Sunday for homework and have some rest. Sometimes I visit my grandparents with my parents. It's very interesting to visit them. 我想每个人都喜欢周末，因为这是放松和玩耍的时间。现在我想谈谈我的周末。 星期六我通常用来玩，比如和朋友打篮球，看电影和电视节目，和家人旅行等等。星期天我通常用来做作业和休息。有时候我会和父母去看望爷爷奶奶。看望他们是件很有趣的事。
六年级英语作文myweekend5句《四》
英语作文 My Weekend
小学英语六年级作文
My Weekend
Hi! I’m Lisa. I’m going to have a weekend. On Saturday, I’m going to the bookstore by bike. I’m going to buy some books. In the afternoon, I’m going to play football with my friends. On Sunday moring, I’m going to do my homework. Then I’m going to clean my bedroom in the afternoon. In the evening, I’m going to watch TV. What about you? What are you going to do on the weekend?
My New Friend
I have a new friend. Her name is Sky. She is 12. She is beautiful. She has a round face and big eyes. She has long hair. Sky lives in Jiaozuo now. She goes to school on foot. She likes music very much. She often plays the violin on the weekend. Sky studies very hard . She is a good student.
How do you go to school?
My home is far from the school. I usually go to school by bus. Because it’s fast. Sometimes I go to school on foot. It’s good for me. What about you? How do you go to school? Can you tell me, please?
My School Life
I like going to school very much, because I am happy in school. In school, I can learn knowledge from teachers. They are always kind to me. Having class is interesting. I like answering questions in class. I am proud to get the right answers. Besides, I am glad to play with my friends and classmates in school. We have many activities after class. We talk to each other, share our lives together. After class, we often play on the playground. We have many games to play. After that, we often go home together. Some of us live nearly. My dog
I have a litte dog“Xiao Pang”.Because It is very tittt small.It'yellow and brown.It olways run with me.It is so big.It like eat meat and rice. Sometime I call it“Xiao Pang ”, then it runs towe fast.
I love my dog.
I love parents
My family is a “Piggy Family”, because my father, my mother and I all like sleeping and eating…
My mother is a doctor. She is very busy. But every evening she usually accompanies me for ten minutes before I go to sleep. At this time, we talk about every thing. So I love my mother very much.
My father was a doctor many years ago. Now he is an officeholder. He is very busy too. But every morning he sends me to school. So I think he’s a good father.
I am a good student. I am very busy too. I like learning and playing. On Saturdays and Sundays I have many subjects ,such as English, mathematics…
Now we are in a forest beside a river. We had lunch just a moment ago. Now we are sleeping---a Piggy Family!
I love parents
Who gives me birth? Who brings me up? Who dedicates his/her whole life to me? My parents.
Who gives me food? Who gives me clothes? Who gives me care? My parents.
My parents, they don’t want to get any reward from me. Not only my parents, all the parents in the world don’t charge anything from their children. they give us everything they can. they spend their whole life loving me, so I love my parents, too. Since I was given birth, I’ve started to love them even if I didn’t realize it.
It will be the time for my birthday soon. I want to say to my parents: I love you.
六年级英语作文myweekend5句《五》
My last weekend(六年级作文)
My last weekend
I had a happy weekend .On Saturday morning , I watched Tv first . Then I washed my clothes . In the afternoon . I stayed at home and cleaned my room. On Sunday morning I visited my grandparents ; In the afternoon I went fishing and rode a bike .On Sunday evening I did my homework .This is my weekend .A busy and happy weekend !
六年级英语作文myweekend5句《六》
英语作文 My weekend
My weekend
I will have a busy weekend.
I will get up early and then I will do some sports. At 7:00 am, I will eat breakfast. At 7:30 am. I will listen to the radio. At 10:00 am. I will watch TV and read some books. At 11:00,I’m going to cook the lunch and eat lunch. I will have a short sleep, because I’m very tried.
On Saturday afternoon, I will wash my clothes and cook with my mother. She is very kind. I’m going to watch TV and go bed in evening. On Sunday morning, I will visit my grandparents with my friends. I will have a picnic at park .At last, I will revise （复习）for my test.
六年级英语作文myweekend5句《七》
小学英语作文-我的周末(on my weekend)
小学英语作文:我的周末（on my weekend）
Hi,this is lin zhenxi. I am going to have a busy weekend! On Saturday, I am going to the bookstore by motor cycle . I am going to buy a new CD and some comic books. then, I am goimg to go home and read the new books.On Sunday, I am going to the subermarket with my parents. We are going after lunch. Then, in the evening, I am going play caeds with my parents and sister. That will be fun! What about you? What are you going to do on the weekend?
六年级英语作文myweekend5句《八》
2014新人教版六年级英语上册第三单元My weekend plan练习题
一．汉译英，英译汉。
看一场电影 明天 今夜 不得不 洗衣服 去野炊 堆雪人 去超市 做家庭作业 画画 晚上 玩儿得开心 下周词典 lesson take a trip 太空旅行 一半价格 lots of 在周二 在周日下午
二．翻译下列句子。
1. Mike id going to see a film. 2. What are you going to do tomorrow? 3. I’m going to have an art lesson. 4. I have to do my homework.
5. Where are you going?
6. 7. When are you going? 8. Tomorrow is Mid-Autumn Festival. 9. My family are going to get together and have a big dinner. 10. F is for family. We will all be together tonight. 三．单项选择。
1. ( ）What mike going to do?
A. am B. is C. are
2. ( ) Is he going to take a bus to school?
A. Yes, he is. B. Yes, she is. C. Yes, he isn’t.
3. ( ) My parents are going to a film.
A. look B. watch C. see
4. ( ) What are you going this morning?
A. to do B. to C. do
5. ( ) She will to visit her grandparents.
A. to B. go C. going
6. ( ) I want to some leaves.
A. see B. look for C. look at
7. ( ) are you going? We are going to the cinema.
A. Where B. When C. How
8. ( ) Why not go Tuesday?
A. in B. on C. at
9. ( ) I would like to buy two .
A. dictionary B. dictionarys C.dictionaries
10. ( ) what can I do for you?
A. Yes, I want a book. B. I want a book. C. You can’t.
11. ( ) my family going to get together.
A. is B. are C. am
12. ( ) what are you going to do Mid-Autumn Festival.
A. for B. in C. at
13. ( ) What are you going to do ?
A. tomorrow B. now C. yesterday
14. ( ) When you an art lesson?
A. are; have B. are; going to have C. is; going to have
15. ( ) are you going tomorrow?
A. What B. When C. Who
16. ( ) They’re going to Beijing next week.
A. in B. at C./
17. ( ) I’m going to the zoo my cousin Jack.
A. at B. with C. in
18. ( ) This is a movie space travel.
A. in B. about C. at
19. ( ) I’m going the bookstore subway.
A. in; by B. on; on C. to; by
20. ( ) I have comic books about space.
A. lot of B. lots of C. a lots of
21.（ ）My grandma will tell a story about Chang’e.
A. us B. we C. our
22. ( ) F is family.
A. on B. for C. at
23. ( ) where are you going tomorrow?
A. I’m going to buy some comic books.
B. I’m going to the bookstore.
C. Can I help you?
四． 根据中文，补全句子。
1. 明天我将要去看电影。
I’m going to tomorrow.
2. 你将要做什么？
What you do?
3. 你将要去哪儿？
Where you 4. 下周你要做什么呢？
What are you going to do ?
5. 我想和我的妈妈去超市。
I want to go to the my mother.{六年级英语作文myweekend5句}.
6. 为什么不周一去呢？
go on Monday?
7 我可以帮你吗？
Can you.
8. 我的家庭将聚集在一起。
My family will .
五． 连词成句。
1. by I train going am
2. visit to I’m my going aunt
3. take to I’m trip a going
4. Renmin we’re tomorrow going to Park
5. to learn are swim going you to
6. wants a to she be teacher
六． 按要求做题。
1. I’对划线部分提问)
2. I’对划线部分提问)
3. I’对划线部分提问)
4. I have comic books. ( 变为一般疑问句)
5. I’m going by train. (变为否定句)
六年级英语作文myweekend5句《九》
新人教六年级英语my weekend plan 练习题
三、读对话，选出下列划线单词的汉语释义。（每题1分，共10分）
( )1.A: What are you going to do tonight? A今天 B今晚 C明晚
( )2.B: I'm going to see a film. A电影 B 电视 C看电影
( )3.A: What are you going to do next week? A下周末 B晚上 C下周
( )4.B: I'm going to Beijing, How about you? A 大约 B关于 C ……怎么样？
( )5.A: I'm going to visit my grandparents. A.看到 B.拍照 C拜访
四、从ABC三个选项中选择合适的答案，把序号填写在题前括号内。（每题1分，共10分）
( ) 1. I am going to __________ my grandparents next week.
A. visit B. visits C. visiting
( ) 2. ---What are you going __________ on Sunday morning? ---I am going to run in the park.
A. to B. to do C. doing
( ) 3. I’m going to buy an __________.
A. comic book B. English book C. story book
( ) 4. ---Have a good time!
---_________________
A. Thank you. B. Good. C. Yes.{六年级英语作文myweekend5句}.
( ) 5.---How is Amy going tomorrow?
---__________________
A. Beijing B. By plane C. On the weekend
( )6.---________ are you going?
---I’m going to the cinema.
A. What B. Where C. When
( )7.I'm going to visit my grandparents ______________.
A. on Saturdays B. this weekend C. last weekend
( )8.Why not _______ on Tuesday?
A. to go B. go C. going
( )9.I am going to buy a comic book__________ space.
A. and B. with C. about
( )10.Sarah ___________ going to buy a book this afternoon.
A. is B. am C. are{六年级英语作文myweekend5句}.
五、读对话，完成句子。（每题2分，共10分） A:_________ are you going this afternoon? B:I am going to the bookstore. A:_____________________________________? B: I'm going to buy a dictionary. A:__________ are you going? B: I'm going at 4 o'clock. A:________ are you going there? B: I'm going there by bike. A: _________are you going with? B:I am going there with my sister.
六、读问句， 选择正确的答语。（每题1分，共5分）
（ ）1. What are you going to do this evening?
（ ）2. When is your sister going to the park?
（ ）3. Who are you going with?
（ ）4. Where is your friend going?
（ ）5. I she going to have an art lesson?
七、阅读理解。 （共计15分）
A、阅读短文， 判断句子，正确的写T,错误的写F。（每题1分，共5分） Tomorrow is Saturday. My family are going to have a busy day. My father is going to visit my uncle in the afternoon. My mother is going to buy some new clothes for me. I am going to have an art lesson in the morning and a music lesson in the afternoon. What am I going to do in the evening? I am going to do my homework. Then I am going to watch TV. What about your Saturday?
（ ）1. Today is Friday.
（ ）2. My father is going to visit my uncle on Sunday afternoon. （ ）3. I have two lessons on Saturday.
（ ）4. I am not going to watch TV tomorrow.
（ ）5. I am going to have some new clothes.
B、阅读短文，用简单的词语或者句子回答所给的问题。（每题2分，共10分） My name is Amy. Tomorrow is Saturday. We have no classes. My parents aren't going to work，but we are going to be very busy tomorrow. My
mother is going to buy something for next week. My father is going to visit my aunt and uncle. I'm going to the bookstore by bus. Then I'm going to buy a dictionary. Tomorrow evening we are going to visit my grandparents and have a big dinner. After that we are going to the cinema. I think we are going to have a nice weekend. 1. Does Amy have classes on Saturday? _____________________________________________________________________
2. What’s Amy's mother going to do tomorrow? _____________________________________________________________________
3. Who’s Amy's father is going to visit? _____________________________________________________________________ 4. When is Amy going to visit her grandparents and have a big dinner? _____________________________________________________________________ 5. Where is Amy going by bike? ____________________________________________________________________ I. Read and choose（读一读，找出每组单词中不同类的一个）
( ) 1. A. time B. morning C. afternoon D. evening
( ) 2. A. cinema B. dictionary C. library D. hospital
( ) 3. A. magazine B. post card C. tonight D. comic book
( ) 4. A. tomorrow B. this weekend C. next week D. yesterday
( ) 5. A. do B. am C. is D. are
II. Read and choose（读一读，选出正确的答案）
( ) 1.What are you going to do this afternoon？
A. I’m going to buy a book. B. I’m a student.
C. I go to school by bike. D. Are you a teacher?
( ) 2
I’m going to buy an English book.
A. Do you have comic book? B. What are you going to buy?
C. This afternoon. D. I’m going to plant trees.
( ) 3.--Are you going to buy books?
--Yes. I want to buy comic books.
A. some, any B. any, some C. any, any D. some, some
( )4. Where are you going this afternoon?
A. I’m going to buy some comic books. B. I’m going to the bookstore.
C. Can I help you? D. I’m going to visit my aunt. ( )
5. -- --This afternoon.
A. Where are you going? B. What are you going to do?
C. When are you going? D. What’s your name?
( )6.It’s 2:00. The boys __________on the playground.
A. run B. running C. are running D. run
( )7.What___________they_____________next week?
A. do；do B. are；doing C. does, does, are D.are; going to do
( )8.Are you going to the park with____________?
A. I B. he C. me D. my
( )9.I’m going to buy some books ___________car.
A. for B. with C. about D. by
( )10.She’s going to ______________the Great Wall next week.
A. visit B. visits C. visiting D. is visiting
III. Read and choose (读句子，选出正确的答语。)
( )1. What are you going to do? A. By train.
( )2. When are you going? B. Take a trip.
( )3. Where are you going? C. Yes, I am.
( )4. How do you go to the zoo? D. At 3 o’clock.
( )5. Are you going to use any books? E. I’m going to Beijing. IV.用括号内所给单词的适当形式填空
1.--What’s he _________ (do)now? He (write) a letter. 2.My family _________(be)going to _____(get) together and have a big dinner. 3.--What _________ (be) Tom ____________ (do) next week?
--He (see) a film.
4.—Can you (sing)?---Yes, I can.
5.—Where __________ (be)she going next mouth? ---She is going to _________(go) to Japan.
V. Read and connect to become a sentence. （连词成句）
1. weekend going this to am do I what (?) __________________________________________________ 2. some draw we to in are Renmin Park pictures going (.)
__________________________________________________
3. space film we to a about travel going are see (!) __________________________________________________ 4.your are lesson do what you to going in (?) __________________________________________________
5. a will my tell Chang’e grandma about us story (.)
__________________________________________________
四、 根据答句写问句或根据问句以及所给的信息写答句。
1. _________________________________________________________ ? I’m doing my homework now.
2. __________________________________________________________ ? I’m going to do some housework for my mom this afternoon.
3. ____________________________________________________________ ?
I always go to the library and read books there on Sunday.
4. ____________________________________________________________ ?
My cousin usually come to my home and do homework with me on Saturday afternoon.
5. ____________________________________________________________ ___ ?
Sometimes my classmates go to the cinema on Saturday evening. 6. What are you going to be in the future? (根据实际情况回答)
___________________________________________________________.
五、 按要求改写句子（8分）
1. John is going to plant trees with his classmates this weekend. （改为一般疑问句）
__________________________________________________________________
2. The monkeys are going to swim in the river .(用who 提问)
___________________________________________________________________
3. We will visit the theme park in summer holiday.( 重写句子，使意思与原句基本相同){六年级英语作文myweekend5句}.
___________________________________________________________________
4. I’m going to buy a book about pandas to Amy. .(就划线部分提问)
_____________________________________________________________________
六年级英语作文myweekend5句《十》
小学五、六年级英语作文范例
小学英语五年级上册各单元作文范例及点评
My English Teacher
Miss Tang is my English teacher. She’s very pretty. She is tall and thin. She has two big eyes and a small mouth. Her hair is long. She likes cats very much. And she likes singing and dancing, too. Her English is very good. We often play games in English classes. She is very kind to us. We all love her.
【要领点评】
这篇作文的题目是“我的英语老师”，是一篇介绍人物的作文。小作者开门见山，直接点题，首先介绍了英语老师的姓名，然后逐一介绍了她的外貌特征、喜好、英语水平、上课特点以及师生情感等。
小朋友们在写作文时，要注意使用自己最熟悉的词[组]，以免写出一些错句子。写作时要注意意思连贯、语句通顺、标点正确、书写清晰、规范等。
My Days of the week
I’m a student and I am in Grade 5.I get up at six o’clock every day. I have breakfast at 6:00, and go to school at 7:00. I have classes from Monday to Saturday. I have an English class on Friday and I have a PE class on Tuesday. I don’t have to go to school on school, and I like to go swimming on that day.
【要领点评】
这篇作文的题目是“我的一周”，小作者没有说一些空话，而是从自己的亲身经历写起，叙述了自己一周七天的所作所为，并特别强调了星期天的喜好，写得自然、流畅。
小朋友们写作文时要注意人称及谓语动词的变化，要依据提示，结合自己的实际，写自己身边熟悉的事情。
My Favourite Food
Do you know what this is? Guess! Its colour is yellow. It’s long and thin. It looks like a small boat and crescent. Oh, it is a banana. Do you know what that is? Guess again! Its colour is orange. It’s round. It looks like a small ball and a small lantern. Oh, it is an orange. I like then a lot. I like ice-creams. I like to chew gum. Chocolates and candies are yummy. I like them very much.
How about you? What’s your favourite food?
【要领点评】
My Favourite Food 是一篇很成功的文章，小作者并不是简单地列举出自己最喜欢的每一种食物，而是有详有略地进行介绍。整篇文章用词准确、语言流畅、没有语法错误。另外，文章中出现了一些生词，可见小作者是用心查字典了。
I can help do housework
I am a girl. My name is Li Ling. I’m in Class Three, Grade Five. I’m helpful at home. I can water the flowers, empty the trash and sweep the floor. After meals, I can help my mother do the dishes. On Sunday, I can wash the clothes. What about you? Are you helpful, too?
【要领点评】
本篇作文的题目是“我可以帮助做家务”，作者主要叙述自己在家帮助做的事情，介绍自己的名字，所在年级及在家能做的家务，很详细，到位。
小朋友们在写作时，应尽量写一些亲自经历的事情，这样会避免在作文时显得太空，因为只有自己经常做的事情印象才会特别深刻。写作时还要注意大小写和时态。
In The Kitchen
This is the kitchen of my family. It’s big and nice. Look! My mother is cooking in it. This is a microwave and that is a stove. There is a big table here. There are many things on it. What are these? They look yummy! Oh, they’re strawberries. And what are those? They are grapes.
【要领点评】
这篇作文的题目是“在厨房”里，作者根据自己家的厨房情况。介绍厨房里有微波炉和电炉，有一张大桌子和桌子上的物品等，以及妈妈在做饭，非常真实。
小朋友们，可以从观察自己身边的事、物写起，利用所学的句子，描述身边熟悉的东西来训练习作。
My Village
My village is very beautiful. There are many houses in the village. Near the village, there is a forest. A small river is in front of the village. The water in it is very clean. We can see some fish in the river. Near the river, you can see a mountain. Some flowers and grass are on the mountain. I like my village. Welcome to my village!
【要领点评】
本文以“我的村庄”为题描述了自己家乡的风景。介绍了村庄的房屋、森林、河流及大山，使人看了这篇作文后确实感觉到“我的村庄”的美丽。小朋友们在写作时，可仔细想一下自己的村庄或所在城市的特点，尽量使用本单元学过的单词或短语进行叙述。
小学英语五年级下册各单元作文范例及点评
My weekend
There are two days on the weekend, Saturday and Sunday. On Saturday, I often go to my dancing class in the morning and do my homework in the afternoon, and I often help my mother do some cleaning. On Sunday, I always visit my grandparents in the morning and do some reading in the afternoon. After dinner, I often watch TV with my parents. At that time, we can talk with each other and say something happily. We often have a good time.
【要领点评】
写法：这篇习作是按照时间顺序记叙周末的活动，记叙了周六和周日的上午和下午分别做了哪些活动及对活动的感受。即：周六上午：舞蹈课→下午：做作业和帮妈妈做清洁→周日上午：看望祖父母→下午：阅读→晚上：看电视，与父母交流→感受：高兴和愉快。我们还可以选取周六和周日中的几个比较主要的活动来写，先说明什么时间在什么地方由什么人做了什么事，有什么感受。再按照活动顺序把活动内容写清楚，最后抒发一下对这次活动或这个周末的感想。
时态：这篇短文我们可以用三种时态来写: a.一般过去时（主要描述你上个周末是怎样度过的）;b.一般现在时（主要描述你经常怎样度过周末）;c.一般将来时（主要描述你要怎样过周末）。这里我们来表述平时是如何过周末的，所以采用一般现在时来写。
注意：活动的相关表达方法可采用旧知识，eg.（例）起床get up，和新知识，eg. Climb mountains去爬山中的un很容易错写成nu。还要注意不要出现病句，eg. “I often watch TV with my parents.”不要写成 “I often with my parents watch TV .” 词量上控制在50 ~ 80 之间。
My Seasons
We have four seasons in a year. I can do many interesting things in each season. In spring, the weather is cool and wind, I can fly kites when it’s wind. And I can go hiking with my family when it’s sunny and cool. I like hiking. Summer is hot in the north of China, but it’s not long time. I often go swimming. It can make me healthy and strong. I can also wear my beautiful dresses. Fall is a season with harvest. And I can eat delicious fruits in this season. I can watch the leaves fall. Winter comes, it’s often snowy in winter in my hometown. When it snows, everything is white. We can play with snow and make a snowman, skate and ski. And winter is my favourite season, because of the Spring Festival. I love seasons. I love the nature.
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写法：这篇短文是描述“我的四季”，在写法上，是根据春、夏、秋、冬四季的更替来写的，先讲明每个季节的特征，之后再写在这个季节中的主要活动或比较有代表性的活动。同时讲一些自己的真实感受，最后阐述自己最喜欢的季节。在实际的写作的时候我们还可以先写出自己喜爱的季节及主要的活动内容，之后再去讲其他几个季节，还可以多讲解一下地域的季节特征和大自然中的其他景色，如：秋天的田地里一片金黄，农民在收割等等，这样写出来的四季更贴近实际。
时态：这篇习作讲的是“我的四季”，是比较惯常的一些行为，所以我们最好采用一般现在时和情态动词结合活动的写法。即：在什么季节，天气如何，我们可以做什么。
注意：在写作内容上，不可以像以往的内容那么简单，因为有四个季节，所以要写明季节，季节天气，季节性活动，活动的人，活动的感受等，要求句子顺序要正确，在写作中还要注意关联词的使用，如用了“因为”，就不能用“所以”，二者不可以同时出现。词量要控制在80个词以内。
My Birthday Party
Every year, when it’s birthday, my parents hold a party for me. They invite my friend to come to my house to celebrate my birthday. I can get many beautiful gifts every year. In my party, we can do many things:
1. Light the candles.
2. Sing a “Happy Birthday” song.
3. Make a wish.
4. Blow out the candles.
5. Cut off the cake.
6. Eat the cake.
7. Open the presents.
8. Sing and dance.
9. Watch videos or play other games.
10. Say goodbye with each other.
That’s my birthday party, is it interesting?
【要领点评】
写法：这篇习作是按活动的顺序来写的，记叙了生日晚会的各项具体活动，比较全面。比较以前几个单元的写作写法，这个短文按活动顺序比较合适。
时态：这篇短文可以用三种时态来写：
1、一般将来时：主要说明生日晚会份的各项计划，都将如何进行。
2、一般现在时：主要说明习惯上如何度过每个生日。
3、一般过去时：主要说明你的生日晚会是如何进行的。
句型：invite sb. to do sth. 邀请某人做某事{六年级英语作文myweekend5句}.
注意：由于这篇短文很有局限性，所表达的大体上都基本相同，所以在书写的时候要注意结合自己的实际活动与真情实感去写。另外注意一些短语和单词的书写不要发生错误：
eg.“吹蜡烛”要写成“blow out the candles”而不能写成“blow candles”。
My family
There are five people in my family. They are my grandma, grandpa, dad, mom and I. Look! Grandma is watching TV. Grandpa is reading a book. Dad is writing an e-mail. Mom is cooking dinner. I am doing my homework. I love my family!
【要领点评】
写法：这篇习作介绍了自己家的家庭成员，以及此刻他们正在干什么，表达了自己对家人的感情。 时态：由于本单元主要讲的是现在进行时态，所以建议采用现在进行时态。
句型：主语+be+动词的现在分词。
注意：本单元的重点是现在进行时态，注意在写句子时要保持时态的完整性，即系动词和动词的ing缺一不可。
In the park
It is sunny today .My mother, my father and I are going to the park. We like the park very much. It is very big and beautiful .There are many trees and flowers in it. Many people like to go there. Look! An old man is sitting on the chair. He is reading a book carefully. Two boys are jumping on the ground. Their mothers are talking with each other. Two birds are flying in the sky. The ducks are swimming in the river. They are very happy. What is the cat doing? Oh, it is running after a mouse. It’s a poor mouse.
【要领点评】
写法：这篇习作是用现在进行时描绘出公园里的人和动物们正在进行的活动还运用了一般现在时叙述了公园美丽的景色。
时态：这篇文章可以采用一般现在时和现在进行时两种时态，由于本单元的语法项目是现在进行时，因此，描述的重点要放在现在进行时态上。
句型：一般现在时：主语+谓语+其他
现在进行时：（1）What +be (am,is ,are)+主语+v.-ing+其他?
（2）主语+be(am,is ,are)+ v.-ing+其他。
A Field Trip
It is a nice day. Our class will have a field trip today. The classmates are very excited. Look! Here we are. There’re a lot of activities to do. Amy is watching insects. Peter is collecting leaves. They want to write a report. Mandy is catching butterflies in the woods. Tim and Bob are playing chess. Some of the classmates are having a picnic. There is a lot of delicious food to eat. Oh, who’s that over there? It’s Miss White. What is she doing? She is taking photos. We had a very good time. I’ll never forget this field trip.
【要领点评】
写法：这篇习作是按照郊游时的画面来描述的，记叙了同学们分别在郊游中做了哪些活动及郊游的感受。 时态：这篇文章可以用一般过去时和现在进行时来写。由于本单元主要讲的是现在进行时，所以，这里我们采用现在进行时比较合适。
句型：××. is/are doing sth. She /He is doing sth. They’re doing sth.
注意：活动的相关表述法采用新旧知识相结合去写。注意时态的转换、描写感受时用一般现在时。
PEP小学英语六年级上册各单元作文范例及点评
Li Ying ’S Hobby
Li Ying likes English very much. She works hard at it. She reads English every morning. She likes speaking English. She often listens to the radio. She watches TV only on Saturday evening.
Does she like dancing? No, she doesn’t. But she likes drawing and singing. Her parents love her. And all the teachers and her friends like her, too. She says her hobbies make her happy.
【要领点评】
这一篇写爱好的文章,小作者的写作思路很值得我们学习,他没有具体写到刘莹的某一种爱好,而是从学习到课余的多种爱好入手,对刘莹的各种爱好进行了粗线条地勾画.从“爱好”这个角度来看刘莹的话，我们会觉得这个形象很饱满。
小朋友们写这种“叙事写人”作文时，可以从两个角度下手：一是具体地描绘；二是和上面小朋友一样，粗线条地勾画，二者各有所长，另处在行文中使用一些问句，使用一些转述的话，可以使作文更有灵气，避免了平铺直叙的缺点。比如上文的“Does she like dancing? No, she doesn’t.”和“she says her hobbies make her happy.”就是十分不错的句子，使读者眼前为之一亮。
Don’t be against the traffic rules
I go to school from Monday to Friday .I go to school by bike at 7:30 in the morning .I must cross two busy roads .If the traffic light is red or yellow,I know I can’t cross the road ,so I wait.
If the light turns green, I know it means “Go”, and then I walk across the road .I always ride on the right side of the road .I am never against the traffic rules.
【要领点评】
这篇作文的题目是“不要违反交通规则”，小作者没有说一些空话，而是从自己的经历写起，叙述自己以什么方式去上学，在上学的路上是怎么做的，很形象。
小朋友们在作文时注意不要图大，那样很容易使文章显得空洞，而要写自己身边熟悉的事情。要注意行文中字母的大小写、句子的标点符号等。
I Love My Family
Here is a photo of my family. These are four people in my family. They are my father, my mother, my brother and I.
My father is a doctor. He works in a hospital far away. He goes to work by subway. My mother is a teacher. She works in a school near my home. She goes to work by bike. After work, they like reading books. Who is the tall boy? He is my brother. He is five years older than me. He is a singer. He’s now in Beijing. He goes there by plane.
I love my family.
【要领点评】
一个平凡的题材，一篇生动的作文。这样的命题，我们可能面对几次，甚至几十次了。但这位小朋友的笔端很是灵巧，了了数言，让一个幸福的家庭跃然纸上，很值得我们去思考，我们能做到吗？
小朋友的这篇作文除了语言优美之外，在结构上也有闪光之处。先总说，将自己的家人逐个介绍一遍，后分说，把家人的工作、上班方式，爱好一一细说。最后以一句话进行概括，起到点题的作用。我们在写类似的作文的时候是不是也可以借鉴呢？