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作为一名高三学生作文英语《一》
给高三学生——英语作文专题
高中作文写作：议论文(专题二）
基本类型:
记叙文---- 写事记叙文、 写人的记叙文
议论文---- 对比观点议论文、说明利弊议论文
说明文---- 事理类说明文、事物类说明文
应用文---- 书信、通知、日记、海报、便条、启事、欢迎词、欢送词、告别词、广告
议论文（一）定义：
议论文又叫说理文，是一种剖析事物、论述事理、发表意见、提出主张的文体。作者通过
摆事实、讲道理、辨是非，以确定其观点正确或错误，树立或否定某种主张。
三要素
论点，论据和论证是议论文的三要素，论点是作者对所论问题所持的见解和主张；论据是用
来证明论点的事实和道理的根据；论证就是用论据来证明论点的方法和过程。一般来说，议
论文每段应有主题句（topic sentence）来确定论点。文章结尾往往提出自己的看法、意见或
建议，表示对某一现象或论点的赞成或反对。论证有立论和驳论两种，作者证明自己的论点
正确，是立论；反之，证明别人的论点错误，是驳论。
议论文的注意事项
1. 论点要鲜明，不可含糊其辞；论据要充分，要能充分证明观点的命题性，论据过程要
条理清晰。
2. 文章安排逻辑性要强，推理要严密。
3. 重在说理，以理服人。
4. 主要使用现在时态。
5. 中学英语书面表达所要求的议论文，是一种限定性的写作，其论点、论据和论证都比
较明确，有的文章提出问题，如：„„为什么？/„„怎么办？/„„该采取什么措施？
考生可以结合题目要求阐述相关的观点，切忌随意发挥。 ★议论文模板
一、正反观点式议论文模板
导入：第1段：
Recently we’ve had a discussion about whether we should…（导入话题）
Our opinions are divided on this topic.（观点有分歧）
正文：
第2段：Most of the students are in favor of it.（正方观点）
Here are the reasons. First… Second…Finally…（列出2~3个赞成的理由）
第3段：
However, the others are strongly against it.（反方观点）
Their reasons are as follows. In the first place… What’s more… In addition…（列出2~3
个反对的理由）
结论：第4段：
Personally speaking ,the advantages overweigh the disadvantages, for it will do us more good
than harm, so I support it （个人观点）
二、“A”或者“B”类议论文模板：
导入：第1段
Some people hold the opinion that A is superior to B in many ways. Others, however, argue
that B is much better. Personally, I would prefer A because I think A has more advantages.
正文：第2段
There are many reasons why I prefer A. The main reason is that… Another reason is that…
(赞同A的原因)
第3段：
All these factors are considered, A is much better than B. From what has been discussed
above, we may finally draw the conclusion that A is superior to B in many ways.…(得出结论)
三、观点论述类议论文模板：
导入：第1段：提出一种现象或某个决定作为议论的话题
As a student, I am strongly in favor of the decision. (亮明自已的观点是赞成还是反对)
The reasons for this may be listed as follows. （过渡句，承上启下）
正文：第2段：
First of all… Secondly…Besides…（列出2~3个赞成或反对的理由）
结论：第3段：
In conclusion, I believe that… (照应第1段，构成“总—分—总”结构)
四、连贯地连接信息
（1）常用的过渡词（组）
1. 表示并列 what’s more, in addition, too ,as well ,besides, furthermore, moreover ,what’s
worse.
2. 表示因果 therefore, for this reason, thus, consequently.
3. 表示转折 but, however, on the contrary, instead, on one hand… on the other hand
4. 表示时间顺序 later, afterwards, from then on ,eventually, in the meantime, then, at the
same time, after a while, at present, after that, finally
5. 表示列举 first, to begin with, secondly, first of all, then, next, finally
6. 举例说明 such as, for example, for instance, take… for example
7. 表示让步 nevertheless, still
8. 表示对比 on the contrary, in contrast, similarly
9. 陈述事实 in fact, actually ,as a matter of fact, to tell you the truth
10. 表示总结 in a word, in short, to sum up, in conclusion, on the whole, to conclude, in brief,
in summary, in general, all in all
11. 表示意义重复 that’s to say, in other words, to put it in another way, to put it differently
12. 表示强调 above all, more importantly, indeed, without any doubt
(2)常用的过渡句式有：
1. I do agree with… 2. In some way, I agree with…,but…
3. This point sounds right, but… 4. However, I think…
5. I definitely believe… 6. In my opinion/view, …
7. Personally, I feel that…/ Personally, I agree with…
8. As far as I’m concerned,…
9. I can’t agree more with the father. Such cases are often seen in our life
10. Attitudes towards…are various. 11. for one thing. …..for another
12. last but not the least….
（4）引用 俗话说/常言道
There goes the old saying… As the saying goes… There is a saying…
As a proverb says… As we all know…
（5）常用句子
1. Different people (students) have different ideas.
2. Different people look at …in different ways.
3. 60% of the students hold the view that… On the other hand, 40% believe that …
4. Opinions on the question are divided as follows: 70% of the students think that…..
On the other hand, 30% don’t like the idea of….
5. I’d love to give my opinion about…..
6. There are many advantages in… First….Second,… Third…
However , there are some disadvantages as well……. Besides,
议论文通常由立论、论证和结论三部分组成，120词左右的议论文无需大量旁征
博引，但要观点明确，逻辑严密，语言简练，以理服人。
同学们在写议论文时不妨采用下面的方法来试一试。
一、 结构上采用三或四段式，显得简明晰。
首段先写主题，然后第二部分写正方或支持方及反方或反对方的观点，尾段写自
己的看法或意见，段落一定要清晰。
二、套话先行。
套话先行可以起到先声夺人的效果。这既能迅速博得阅卷老师的好感，又能避免
过早出现无谓的错误。
1、首段通常为
1） Many nations/college students have been faced with the problem of ……
2） Recently the problem has been brought into focus.
3） Recently the phenomenon has become a heated topic.
4） Recently the issue has aroused great concern among ……
5） Nowadays there is a growing concern over ……
6） Never in our history has the idea that …… been so popular.
7） Faced with ……, quite a few people argue that ……{作为一名高三学生作文英语}.
8） According to a recent survey, ……
9） With the rapid development of economy/society……,
10）Recently we held(have hold)a discussion whether….
11) When it comes to…, (当说到…)
2.、第二段首句通常可以这样写：
As is known to all…play(s)an important part/role in our daily life/modern society.
However, different people have different opinions(背熟此句，想错都难)．．．
Some people/The majority of the students think it (is) a good
idea/important/useful/convenient for somebody（根据题意改人称）to do….
Others argue/claim that the opposite/reverse is true…
列举观点
或Obviously ….. has both advantages and disadvantages．…../However，just as
every coin has two sides，…has it’s disadvantages．
如果是两个论据，可以采用下列模式：
on one hand+1…+on the other hand 2.
或…is one thing..is another…
如果是三个以上的论据，则可以简单采用以下模式：
Firstly,/to begin with…+Secondly/furthermore,…Finally/last but not the least,…
注意：表明各方观点时常用一般现在时态。
3.结论 陈述自己观点
There is probably some truth in both arguments／statements，but…
As far as I’m concerned/Personally/As for me/in my opinion/Personally speaking(尽
量避免使用I think).
总结全文时常用到in one/a word，generally speaking，to conclude。
若提出解决办法时却常使用下一句型：
1） From what has been discussed above, we can draw the conclusion that ……
2） It is high time that strict measures were taken to stop ……
3）. We should take measures to …
4）. We’d better take effective measures to prevent …
5）. The government decided to take strong measures against …
6）. Urgent measures should be taken to prevent….
7） It is necessary that steps should be taken to ……
8） In conclusion, it is imperative that ……
9） There is no easy method, but ……might be of some help.
10） To solve the above-mentioned problem, we must ……
11） In summary, if we continue to ignore the above-mentioned issue, more problems
will crop up.
12） With the efforts of all parts concerned, the problem will be solved thoroughly.
13） We might do more than identify the cause ; it is important to take actions to ……
14） Taking all these into account, we ……
15） Whether it is good or not /positive or negative, one thing is certain/clear……
问题解决型作文模板
/Nowadays，more and more people are concerned about the
problem…(问题)
/It is important for us to…(问题).
For instance_____________________(例一)
First，_________________________(原因一).
Moreover，_____________________(例二)
Second，_______________________(原因二)
第二段：People have figured out many ways to solve the problem．
/Confronted with…(问题)we should take a series of effective measures
to cope with the situation．
Firstly，________________________(解决方法一)
Secondly，______________________(解决方法二)
第三段：1)Personally，I believe that_______________(我的方法)
/To me，I am taking two ways to solve the problem of…(问题)
One of them is ________________________(我的方法)
The other way is_______________________(方法二)
By now ways have been working perfectly and efficient1y…(结果)
2) In conclusion/In a word/To sum up/In summary/Obviously/It’s clear
that…/It’s no doubt that….
现象解释型作文模板
作为一名高三学生作文英语《二》
2014年高考英语作文范文
中学生应当如何保持身体健康
【书面表达】
有报道表明，中国中学生的健康状况已经不如以前。你作为一名中学生,请结合本人实际及以下提示，分析原因，提出合理建议，说明中学生应当如何保持身体健康。
1. 吃太多肉类，糖类食物和垃圾食物, 暴饮暴食。须平衡饮食结构，多吃蔬菜水果。
2. 花太多时间看电视，上网或玩游戏，肥胖问题较多。应当摆脱不良生活习惯，须增加户外活动,加强锻炼
3. 睡眠不足。须劳逸结合，早睡早起
注意：词数120左右
【参考范文】
It is reported that Chinese middle school students are not as healthy as they used to be. There are quite a few reasons for this situation.
Firstly, we often eat too much meat, sugar, or junk food. It's our healthy diet that can keep us fit. We are supposed to balance our diet to eat food in a proper amount. We should take in more fruit and vegetables which are abundant in vitamins. Secondly, some of us kill time by playing computer games, watching TV and surfing the Internet, which contribute to being overweight. It is essential to get rid of those bad habits and take more exercise, like playing football，basketball. It goes without saying that outdoor activities can save us from being overweight. Thirdly, some often work deep into the night. But teenagers should sleep for at least 8 hours a day. Early to bed and early to rise.
As middle school students, we should take it seriously and immediate action should be taken to cope with the problem. Health is the guarantee of everything.
谈谈你对高三生活的体会和建议 书面表达（满分25 分）
作为一名高三学生的你，明年即将毕业。现在校报征稿，请根据以下要点写一篇英语短文，谈谈你对高三生活的体会和建议。
1. 对老师与家长的关爱表示感谢；
2. 向与自己发生过矛盾的同学表达歉意；
3. 努力学习，实现人生梦想；
4. 对学弟、学妹的建议。
注意：
1. 可适当加入细节，使行文连贯；
2. 词数：100 左右（开头已给出，不计入总字数）。
High school is always considered as the most cherished period of one's life. As a Senior 3 student, it won't be long before I
graduate.___________________________________________
【参考范文】
High school is always considered as the most cherished period of one's life. As a Senior 3 student, it won't be long before I graduate. Now, I have much to share with my fellow students.
Firstly ,I would like to show my appreciation to those standing by me all the way, teachers, parents and friends included. Without their help and advice, my life would be different. Secondly, it's high time to say sorry to classmates whom I hurt or misunderstood. Communication and smiles act as bridges to friendship .Above all, I've made up my mind to make every effort to study, for I believe hard work is the key to success. Just as the old saying goes, "No pains, no gains."
Finally I hope that all the younger fellows can make full use of time, because time and tide wait for no men.
作为一名高三学生作文英语《三》
如何提高高三学生的英语作文水平
如何提高高三学生的英语作文水平
摘 要：在现今的高考英语考卷中，英语作文分数几乎占据了总分的五分之一还要多，可以说占到了举足轻重的地位。所以，如何提高作文得分成了学生英语取得高分的关键。
关键词：积累；结构；促进
笔者将从自己这几年的实践经验来谈谈高三学生提高英语书面表达的策略。
一、每日背诵，注重句型积累
我所教的学生都是北方的学生，他们在英语方面似乎是先天不足，英语学习不仅开始的比南方迟，而且英语学习氛围也不浓，所以基本是哑巴英语，只能纸上谈兵。有背诵就有检查，不管每天多忙我都抽出一些时间对当日的背诵进行检查，有时是逐个检查，有时是集体默写，有时是套用句型进行造句。这样坚持两个月左右，学生的句型表达水平明显提高。
二、融写作于课堂，提高学生段落和篇章结构
在高一、高二时，因为是新授课，所以经常可以让学生写课文小结或是写一些话题作文。而高三除了周末练时才有作文训练，也就是说，一周基本只练习一次。这对于高三学生来说当然是远远不够的。那么，高三下学年基本都是复习课、习题课，如何在这种课型中融入写作呢？在每堂课中穿插作文训练就显得尤为重要。在练习课时，本人经常这样操作：每节课留7～8分钟让学生写一段，学生可以在四篇阅读中任选一篇写读后感，在复习课文时，学生可以
作为一名高三学生作文英语《四》
13年高考优秀作文及满分作文范例
2013四川 某中学生英文报近期开辟专栏，讨论学习习惯问题，请你结合自身学习实际，按一下提示，用英文为该专栏写一篇稿件。
1. 说明学习习惯与学习效果之间的关系;2. 介绍一种好的学习习惯并提出养成该习惯的建议;3. 描述自己在学习习惯方面存在的某个问题并给出改进措施
注意：1. 词数120左右，开头语已为你写好 2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯 It’s useful and necessary to discuss learning habits. As we all know, good learning habits can make your study go to succeed. As a student, we should pay more attentions to our habits which we develop in our study.
I’m sure “repeat” is a best habit. Do you develop the habit? If we want to improve our study, we should repeat what the teachers taught us again and again, and then we can understand or remember the knowledge which the teachers demand us to master. How to develop the habit? the first step, set a timetable, and stick to carry out the plan, don’t stop.
When I do my homework, I often make mistakes with carelessness, how to overcome the shortage? I think I should think about it over and over as long as I do my homework. And then I do it little by little. Maybe in this way I can correct my mistakes.
2013年全国卷Ⅰ高考英语作文题是，开会接机。主要是要求大家用英文把这件事情阐述清楚。下面一起让我们来看看整个的作文要求，同时还为考生提供了一篇优秀的英语作文范文，供广大的考生参考使用。
假定你是李华。请你给笔友Peter写封信，告诉他你叔叔李明将去他所在城市开会，带去他想要的那幅中国画，同时询问他是否可以接机。信中还需说明：李明：高个子，戴眼镜 航班号：CA985 到达：8月6日上午11:30 注意：1. 词数100左右 2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯;3. 开头语和介绍语已为你写好。 Dear Peter,
How are you doing?
I’m writing to tell you that my uncle Li Ming is going to your city for a conference, and I’ve asked him to bring you the Chinese painting you’ve asked for before.
Also, I’d like you to do me a favor. Would you please meet my uncle at the airport and take him to his hotel since this is the first visit to the U.S.? Thank you in advance!
His flight number is CA985, and it will arrive at 11:30 am. August 6. My uncle is tall and he is wearing glasses. And he will be in blue jacket. Looking forward to your reply.
2013年江西卷卷高考英语真题中的英语作文题是，你作为一名英语报刊的记者，对一次登山活动进行报道。作文题中已经给出了基本的要求，展现你作文分数高度的就是你对活动的评论了。下面让我们来看看优秀的范文是如何处理这些细节性的东西的。 1. 时间与地点：4月10日，大青山(Daqing Mountain);2. 活动的过程;
3. 你对于这次活动的评论。注意：1. 词数120左右。2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 In order to encourage the students to take outdoor exercise, our school organized a mountain-climbing on April 10. Hundreds of us took part in it.
It was a nice day. At 8:00 am, we gathered at the foot of Daqing Moutain and set out for the top in high spirits. All the way we were chatting, singing and laughing, enjoying the fresh air and the beautiful scenery. When some fell behind, others would come and offer help. About 2 hours later, we all reached the top. Bathed in sunshine, we jumped and cheered with joy.
The activity benefited us a lot. Not only did it get us close to nature and give us relaxation from heavy school work, it also promoted the friendship among us. What a wonderful time!
2013年山东卷高考英语作文题目是关于暑期的打算，主要的过程是你的美国朋友问你
即将到来的暑假你有什么打算。希望同学们根据这个情节作文写出自己的想法和打算。下面为同学们提供了一份2013年山东卷高考英语作文范文，仅供参考。
假如你是新华中学的学生李华，你的美国朋友Tom一周前给你发电子邮件，询问你暑假里的打算，但你因准备期末考试未能及时回复。请根据双下要点给他回封邮件： 1. 未及时回信的原因;2. 你假期的打算(如做兼职、旅行、做志愿者等) 注意：1. 词数：120-150;2 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 Dear Tom,
How are you doing? You asked me in your last letter about my plan for the coming summer vacation. I am sorry that I didn’t reply without delay. How I wish I would read and reply your email as soon as I received it. However, I was busy preparing for my final exam at that time, which is vital for me. As a result, I had no choice but to completely focus on my study, for which I am very sorry. I hope you can understand me.
During the holiday, I am going to do a part-time job. On the one hand, I can earn some money to reduce the burden of my family. On the other hand, I accumulate the social experience, which does good to my future life. At the same time, I will not forget to go over my lesson. I will spend a instructive holiday. How will you spend your holiday? I hope you have a good time.
These are my plan for the summer vacation. What’s yours? I am looking forward to your earliest reply.
2013年湖北卷高考英语作文题，是根据一段英语对话的提示，让学生进行想象，继续合理的作文。面对考题出现的这一段英语，你想到了怎么样写英语作文了吗?下面让我们一起来看看高考英语作文范文。
My classmate admires my fluent English very much and I usually feel encouraged by his compliments.
One day, when we learned the new word “eccentric” in class, we were asked to make a sentence with it. I volunteered to do it by saying “My deskmate is an eccentric boy whose clothes never fit him.” Hearing this, the whole class burst into laughter and my deskmate’s face turned red. After class, I learned from the teacher that my deskmate would have dropped out of school if he hadn’t been helped by others. My mindless words must have hurt him deeply.
Not until then did I realize words could be powerful in both positive and negative. We should avoid hurting others if we can’t always be encouraging when we speak.
2013年重庆市高考英语作文 看图作文，一定要仔细看清楚，图画中的每一个细节，同时把整个照顾生病的妈妈的细节记录清楚。提醒，考生们平时还要注意多多的积累英语句型，这样才能让英语作文有高分。
I must say that I have been behaving this way to some degree. Though I know Mum is the most important person in my world, I just can not do what she likes me to do. It seems that I quite often stay away from my dear mum in playing my phone, sleeping, hanging out with my friend, or just shutting out my mum in my room.
Having read about the above common complaint from so many mothers, I feel ashamed and guilty. From now on, I shall try my best to stay with my dear parents as often as possible. I must confess we young generation must realize that our parents care for us as well as hoping to share what we have been doing with them.
2013年上海高考英语作文题目 上海博物馆拟举办一次名画展，现就展出场所(博物馆还是社区图书馆)征集公众意见，假设你是王敏，给上海博物馆写一封信表达你的想法。你的信必须满足以下要求：1. 简述你写信的目的及你对场所的选择;
2. 说明你的理由(从便利性，专业性等方面对这两个场所进行对比) To whom it may
concern:
I’ve learned that an art exhibition is to be held and that you’re collecting suggestions on its location. I’m writing this letter to share with you my opinions.
In my opinion, it is more advisable to hold the art exhibition in Shanghai Museum than in community libraries. My reasons are as follows.
On one hand, it is more convenient for people to get to Shanghai Museum which is located in the center of the city. And the museum is much more spacious than community libraries, which provides visitors with a more comfortable environment for appreciating art.
On the other hand, as a well-known museum, Shanghai Museum is more professional and experienced in holding art exhibitions. Its professional security guards and advanced facilities can better protect those famous paintings from being damaged or stolen. Therefore, I suggest the exhibition be held in the museum.
如今孩子的成长以及教育问题是社会议论纷纷的话题，2013福建高考英语作文题目就以这个话题，配有一副漫画图。对父母包揽一切，孩子过度依赖父母的现象进行评析。看到了这样的漫画，你想到的什么呢?为同学们提供一篇范文，看看都是从哪几方面谈论，有什么地方是值得我们学习的呢?
内容要求：1.描述漫画内容;2. 分析漫画所揭示的问题; 3. 提出你的看法。 注意：
1.短文开头已给出，不计入总词数; 3.词数120左右; 2.考生可适当发挥，使文章内容充实、连贯;
4. 文中不能出现考生的具体信息。参考词汇:pave the way
From the picture, we can see a family of three walking on a long red carpet. One possible version:
From the picture we can see a family of three walking on a long red carpet.The son , well dressed, waves proudly in the middle while the father behind bends forward to hold the jacket and the mother in front rolls out the carpet, sweating.
It shows a common phenomenon nowadays that children are the focus of families, shouldering the hope of their parents. Parents arrange everything for their children and spare no effort to pave the way for their success. As a consequence, children become so reliant on their parents that they have no independent thought or creative ideas.
Such a situation is of great concern. In my opinion, overprotection and too much care are extremely bad for children’s development. Instead of doing everything for them, parents should encourage their children to overcome difficulties and inspire them to develop by themselves. Only in this way can they grow up to be independent and become truly successful.
2013年浙江卷高考英语真题中的英语作文题目是命题作文：One Thing I’m Proud of。通过对这件事情的阐述，谈谈自己的引以为自豪的原因以及从中得到了怎样的启示。看看自己的作文和英语作文范文差距在哪里呢。了解到不足，才会改正才会更加有进步的空间。
One Thing I’m Proud of
I still remember how I became a good table tennis player.
The first day I went to high school, I saw some of my classmates playing table tennis. Amazed at how skillful they were, I was determined to be just as good. Later on, I often watched them carefully to learn their techniques. Then I kept practicing until I became confident enough to challenge the good players. At the end of the term I became one of the best players in my class. I am really proud of this experience, because it helps me realize that we all can fulfill our potential and achieve our goals through hard work. It also helps me better understand the proverb "Practice makes perfect.”
2014 高考考前冲刺
作文是英语知识水平的综合素质体现，它要求同学们既要有扎实的语言基本功，又要具备一定的审题能力、想象能力、表达能力、评价能力及书法排版能力。因为基本功不扎实，多数同学在作文时总会出现这样或者那样的问题，例如，文体不符、词汇误用、句子单一等，造成作文的得分较低，影响了总的英语成绩。因此，作文能力不强一直是同学们比较普遍的问题。其实归结起来，作文“缺钙”一共有四类症状，深入地剖析这些症状，就能找到作文偏科的根本原因，同时写作时适当地套用一些模板，给写作能力“缺钙”的同学好好进补。
症状一：文体格式混乱
【表现】 读了作文要求之后，提笔就写——明明要求写一封表达建议的书信，结果写成了议论文；或者明明要求写说明文，偏偏写成了记叙文；或者总算文体没有弄错，结果写通知误用日记的格式，写书信又误用通知的格式。
【症结】 平时缺乏作文文体方面的针对性训练，对英语作文的几种常用文体及其相应的写作格式不熟悉，拿到写作材料习惯性地对写作要求一扫而过，提笔就写自己最熟悉的格式。
【突破之道】明确文体和对应格式
常用文体有记叙文、说明文、议论文还有应用文等。近几年的高考书面表达多以应用文为主，提供的形式多以图画、提纲、表格出现，书写的格式大都是书信、通知。所以，同学们应该掌握书信的称呼、开头、正文、结尾、签名等方面，另外，口头通知和书面通知的不同要清楚。总之，同学们应根据写作提示分析材料，明确写作文体和其相应的格式。
症状二：时态人称混乱
【表现】 作文时，时态和人称运用混乱——时态方面，要么整篇文章都是一种时态（以一般现在时、一般过去时居多），要么就是一段甚至一句话中出现三种以上的时态；人称方面，要么文章开头是第一人称，写到文中甚至文末就成了第二、第三人称，要么前面是单数人称，写着写着就变成复数人称。
【症结】 英语基础知识不牢固，对英语中时态和人称所代表的含义及其运用掌握不足，因此无法根据文体来选择正确的时态和人称而滥用或者混用。 【突破之道】 明确时态和人称
同学们要根据选好的文体和写作内容确定时态和人称。一般来说，记人叙事多用一般过去时；发布通知多用一般将来时和祈使句式；发表议论大多用带有情
2014高考复习全攻略
态动词的一般现在时；人物介绍、现状说明常用一般现在时和现在完成时。定准时态后接下来一定要知道各时态的构成及用法要点，但要记住，写作时时态并不唯一，要依据表达内容而选定正确的时态。人称方面则要注意前后统一，避免出现前后人称属性或者单复数不一致的情况。
症状三：词汇运用混乱
【表现】 经常出现乱用词语的现象，同时使用一些较难的、较长的、用法不熟悉的单词，或者明明用一些简单的词汇就能够很清楚地表达意思，偏偏要选择一些难度较大的、不常用的表达方式。
【症结】 写作时对文章的脉络把握不足就匆匆下笔，对其中所需的词汇和常用表达方式理解记忆不牢固。平时练习时，习惯性地忽略一些形式简单但用途较广泛的基本词汇和表达方式，喜欢选择复杂的词汇和表达方式。 【突破之道】确定所需主要词汇和所用表达结构 应该根据文章体裁和内容逐个确定写作要点。对于图画和图表可在草稿纸上用中文列出并理清要点，然后选词造句，要注意语言的准确得当，力求用最简洁的话表达准确的意思。同时，平时写作要多进行发散思维，例如，是用verysorry还是terriblysorry，是surprised还是astonished。
症状四：语序句序混乱
【表现】 作文的语序、句序混乱，通常这里写一点，跳过去又另起一点，这样造成要么文章洋洋洒洒一大篇却全是废话，没有中心和重点，什么都没有表达清楚；要么通篇没有适当的过渡词、句，整篇文章一“逗”到底，密密麻麻让人找不着北。
【症结】 平时练习时不注意表达的连贯性，想到哪里就写到哪里，写作之前没有列提纲的习惯，不去深入思索怎样表达才能达到最好的效果，从而造成整篇文章逻辑思维混乱，层次不清晰。 【突破之道】 整理成篇 行文连贯
同学们应该根据写作内容列好简要提纲，分清文章的层次，确定详略，写好的单句要重新排列组合起来，使之前后连贯成一篇完整的文章。同时选用恰当的关联词或句子使文章过渡自然，行文流畅。另外，该分段时要分段，这样文章才能中心突出，一目了然，整篇作文才能如行云流水般整齐划一。
2013万能英语模板 图标作文
As is shown by the figure/percentage in the table/picture,____ has been on rise/ decrease, significantly/dramatically rising/decreasing from ____ in _____ to _____ in _____. From the sharp rise/decline in the chart, it goes without saying that _____.
There are at least two good reasons accounting for _____. In one hand, ____.In the other hand, _____ is due to the fact that ______.In addition, ______ is responsible for _____. Maybe there are some other reasons to show ______.But itis generally believed that the above mentioned reasons are commonly convincing.
As far as I am concerned, I hold the point of view that _______. I am sure my opinion is both sound and well-grounded.
书信作文模板 Your address Month, Date, year Receiver's address Dear ...,{作为一名高三学生作文英语}.
I am extremely pleased to hear from you. And I would like to write a letter to tell you that_____. „„
I will greatly appreciate a response from you at your earliest convenience/I am looking f0rward to your replies at your earliest convenience.
Best regards for your health and success. Sincerely yours,
话题作文
作为一名高三学生作文英语《五》
2011学年上海市高三英语一模——作文
2012届（2011学年）上海市高三英语一模——作文
（宝山）
90. 近年来高校自主招生（autonomous enrolment）的比例越来越大，作为一名高三学生，请你谈谈自己的看法。
文章必须包括以下内容：
简单介绍目前高校自主招生的形势 你是否喜欢自主招生这种模式 结合实例说明你喜欢或不喜欢的理由
（崇明）
右图是一个傍晚时分在某一社区广场上拍摄的照片，很多中老年的女性居民在跳舞锻炼身体，这样的场景在我们身边也比比皆是，请简要描述图片，并针对这一现象谈谈你的看法。
你的作文应包括：
对图片的简要描述；
你对这一现象的看法；
你的建议。
(奉贤)
国际文化交流中心将组织一次由各国学生参加的“和平·友谊”(Peace & Friendship)冬令营活动，要求报名者提交一份英文个人介绍。假设你是刘超，想参加这次活动，请按要求完成一份个人介绍，你的介绍须包括：
●个人基本信息：如，姓名等；
●个人兴趣爱好、特长等；
●参加这次冬令营的目的。
注：文中不能出现真实信息：如，姓名、学校等
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上海市正提倡建设“节约型社会”，下图为某校两个学期用水、用电、用纸的情况。请对其进行简要分析，以“How to build an economized society”为题，写一篇作文，谈谈自己的想法。
How to build an economized society
Our city government is aiming to build an economized society．It is everybody’s duty to work hard to achieve this goal, including us students．
The above report of statistics suggests that the expenses of electricity, water and paper in a school are surprisingly large and growing rapidly, which draws our attention．
As a member of society, we must keep the following in our minds．Firstly, make sure that the lights and all the other electric facilities are turned off when we leave rooms．Secondly, try to form the habit of turning off the tap after it is used and the waste water can be reused for more purposes．Thirdly, save paper as much as possible in our everyday life．It is even better to reuse it．
In a word, if we pay much attention to our everyday behavior and take actions to reduce waste, we can make contributions to an economized society．
（黄浦区）
下学期，你们学校高三年级将开展“再见，母校（alma mater）”毕业生主题系列活动，请你为此活动出谋划策。你的文章需包括：为此主题系列活动设计的2-3个具体的活动及方案，并简要陈述这些活动的目的和意义。（文中请不要出现真实的校名和人名。）
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下面的一幅漫画描写了当前社会的教育状况，请结合自己的感受谈谈你对这种状况的看法。你的作文必须包括：
We can see in the picture a child is burdened with heavy schoolbags as well as huge mental pressure．When he was young, he was expected to be able to go to a key elementary school，and later a key high school．And now he is expected to be admitted to a key university．Under such distress and difficulties，how can he seek dynamic and active self-development?
Reducing the children’s heavy burden requires efforts from schools， society, as well as parents．Education that breaks the natural rules of children’s development in body and mind is bound to fail．In short，parents as well as teachers should become active supporters of all-round character education and work closely with each other in guiding the students towards a balanced development．{作为一名高三学生作文英语}.
（金山）
请介绍一下你课余时间最喜欢做的一件事。你的文章必须包括以下内容：
（静安）
请你写一篇The Day My Classmate Fell 111 or Got Injured...的文章。
你的文章必须包括以下内容：
1. 简述一下这位同学生病或受伤的情况
2. 同学、老师和我是符合帮助他/她的{作为一名高三学生作文英语}.
3 漫画所反映的社会教育状况。 你对这种现状的观点和看法。 什么事？ 如何做的？ 为何喜欢？ （注意不要出现真实的人名和校名）
3. 人与人之间的这种互相关爱给我的感受是......
（卢湾）
最近，越来越多的人在网上建了微博（set up one’s microblog）。一方面，微博作为展示自己的窗口，和朋友交流的途径，已逐渐被人们所接受。但另一方面，不少人认为上微博要花相当多的时间和精力，会耽误学习和工作。
请对这一现象进行简要描述，并发表自己的看法。
（文中不能提到真实姓名和学校。）
（闵行）
请根据下图写一篇120—150个词的短文。你的短文应包括下列要点：
1. 简要描写图画内容；
2. 说明图画含义；
3. 表达你的观点。
（浦东）
每个人都有自己的闪光之处。请结合自身成长过程，叙述一件最值得自己骄傲的事，并说说其中的感悟。
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(普陀)
某高中校方在全校征求学生建议。李佳给校长写了封信，建议学校培养学生学习能力，以提高他们在这个信息爆炸的世界上的竞争力。同时建议学校组建学生俱乐部，学生得以展露才华，培养兴趣，获得更多的生存能力。
Dear Headmaster,
I am most pleased to learn that our school is seeking students’ suggestions on how to make our school life better. I am writing this letter to share with you my suggestions.
First of all, our school should lay more emphasis on cultivating students’ learning methods. As the saying goes, teachers should not only pass on knowledge to students but also teach them how to study. In a world of information explosion, if students can be equipped with independent learning skills, no doubt they can have an advantage in this increasingly competitive world.
In addition, students’ after school life can never be overlooked. Our school should set up more clubs where students can display their talents and acquire some survival skills such as how to get along with others and how to be a team player. Allowing for more leisure time means that students can devote more time pursuing their interests and hobbies, which may well turn out to be a welcome supplement to their beautiful life later.
Thank you for spending your precious time reading my letter and I hope my suggestions can be of some help.
Best wishes
（青浦）
不久前，好朋友Alex给你（李华）写了一封信，信中提及：
他很认同你支持生态旅游（ecotourism）的态度；
他想进一步了解你在寒假里进行生态旅游的打算，如做什么，
以及理由。